Thursday, October 25, 2007

Help me with the title


Oh, how could you leave me and hold her hand?

The moments despite me, i cant undertsand!

I was so stupid, insane, when i loved you so

i was a fool, how could i not see, you were the foe!



i ignored the whispers of reality,

i lived for youI neglected the moments,

i'm all empty..

broken ..

the love we had, i couldnt undo!



Oh, How could you Hold her, to your heart?

how could you forget me, and the times we had?

your lap was mine, laughters and smiles,

the tears, the pains, sadness, and lies!



nowfar from you, amongst the clouds

where i can scream ...

where alone.

.i dream

where i can recall, all your sounds!



perhaps we've departed, perhaps we're gone

maybe we were never meant to be -One-

maybe this love,

was only affection

infatuation

lasting for a while

you were My eternal addiction!



Oh, how could you, love, and kiss her lips?

how could you deny me, deny our peomises?

You said you'll be mine, to the end of time

guess i was dreaming, of a perfect rhyme...



i ignored the whispers of reality,

i lived for you

I neglected the moments,

i'm all empty..

broken ..

Killed and Guilty!

the love we had, i wish i would undo!



4:20 am - 25/oct/2007Marizela.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh my lovely mary iz here?
I dont like her sad,
but good to see your blog
and the poem was so touching...

Anonymous said...

Hello,
Im Karla, well I was reading through internet and I found this poem that really touches the soul. :)

And my opinion about the title is, maybe you can use
1.- "how could you?"
2.- "my eternal affection"

...well not matter what title you use, the poem it's so inspiring!

vazy_k@hotmail.com

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